That was actually good!

Wow. Good first submission!

Good:
-Smooth sprites.
-Fitting music.

Bad:
-Spelling
-Story(anticlimax deluxe!)
- Not much movement in some battle scenes.

OK. May this flash not get blammed.

All i can say is...

Wow. This is so much better than everything else you submitted. If you make more flash films in this quality, it won't be soon before you are one of my favorite authors.

Blah..

Decent execution of an idea that's been done SO many times....

Needs work

Good idea, but...
1. The control was slow
2. You didn't get enough instructions
3. Overall it needs more work